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I waited for you until tomorrow became ordinary— another morning opening, another evening sending rain through the grated drain beside the sentence I did not speak. Under the overpass water worried the gutter into its thin black shine. Your fingers held the rusted rail. My hand came close enough to feel the cold on it. Above us, traffic crossed then crossed again, its hard roar taking the air before either of us could use it. I meant to tell you I carried that evening past its proper end: the rail, the rain darkening our sleeves, the clean sliver of ground between our shoes. I thought the bridge would keep what passed below it. Then the storms came hard. Runoff pulled silt through the drain, pressed leaves against the fence, turned the broken bottle until it faced a different way. The road remained. Below it, the low place filled with rain too dark to show what had fallen in. I meant to tell you: remember us here. Not as a future. Not as an answer. As two people beneath traffic, rain at their shoes, one unspoken name turning and returning against the stone.



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