A contemporary poem about what the eye cannot repair, using a concrete image system, a pressured turn and a restrained open ending.
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What the eye cannot repair, the mind decorates. It adds a story, a cause, a destination. I remove each one carefully. Underneath is not truth, exactly— only a shape with enough silence left to remain alive.
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