A contemporary poem about the window refuses the view, using a concrete image system, a pressured turn and a restrained open ending.
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The window refuses the view. Beyond it, the city is folded into a white square. I clean the glass; the blank returns. Then a moth lands on the pane. For one second, the world is present as a small body trying to get through.
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