A contemporary poem about two bodies, one error, using a concrete image system, a pressured turn and a restrained open ending.
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Two bodies make one quiet error: they trust the floor to understand. A knee slips, a palm turns upward, and the whole arrangement listens. No one calls this love. The mistake is already doing enough.
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