A contemporary poem about the weather refuses the window, using a concrete image system, a pressured turn and a restrained open ending.
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The storm is indoors, but only at the glass. Outside, children trade marbles in the sun. Inside, the pane gathers a dark breath. I wipe it clean; the darkness returns. Some things are not seen through. They are seen because they remain.
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