A darkness & chaos poem about room, chair, floor, where attention changes the scale of the ordinary.
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Before the object moves, the room gives up its level. A chair keeps faith with the floor; the floor keeps none with me. I stand inside the small disaster and call it looking.
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A field remains open after judgement fails, allowing the speaker to see without forcing a conclusion.
A darkness & chaos poem about address, name, glass, where attention changes the scale of the ordinary.
An object has no address in the known world, but the speaker recognises the feeling of being similarly unplaced.
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