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I’m waiting here for you, ever alone, lost in the echoes of a song I once knew. Singing out of my head, you bellow— a voice that lingers, a ghost I can't undo. I join along, caught in your melody’s sway, knowing that everything will never be this good again, never this way. When she sings, I breathe out, hoping to release you from my mind, but out of my head, you sing, a haunting refrain that refuses to unwind. And I wonder, when I sing along with you, will everything you do return again when I promise to say when? Got to promise to say stop, when I say when— but the words are stuck, the lines blur, and I bend to the rhythm of your lingering tune, dancing in shadows, a love that consumes. I’m tangled in your song, the one that pulls me along, and I wonder if this time, I can let go and move on. But every note is a thread, every breath, a regret— of promises made, of chances unmet. If I say stop, will you truly let go? Or will I find myself lost in your echoes below? For everything you do is a tether, a chain of memories that won’t sever, and I’m left here singing, waiting for you, forever. When she sings, I try to let you out, but your melody is a noose, a whisper turned to a shout. I need to promise to say stop when I say when— but I’m caught in this loop, and it all begins again. So sing me out of my head, let me promise and pretend, that I’ll stop when I say when, but I know I’ll stay, waiting here for you, forever alone, singing the song that never ends.



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