A contemporary poem about the pressure between us, using a concrete image system, a pressured turn and a restrained open ending.
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The pressure between us has no colour, but it changes the room around it. We lean, and the furniture learns. We pause, and the floor grows patient. Closeness is not an answer. It is a force asking to be named.
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