A contemporary poem about the door learns disobedience, using a concrete image system, a pressured turn and a restrained open ending.
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The door learned disobedience from the wind. It opened when asked to stay, stayed when called by its old name. I stopped correcting it. A house can be a border or an argument with a border.
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