A contemporary poem about suspended in plain sight, using a concrete image system, a pressured turn and a restrained open ending.
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Suspended in plain sight, the strange thing avoids becoming an event. People pass with their errands intact. I wait for the world to point. It does not. Perhaps attention is the crossing.
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