A contemporary poem about small weather in the hall, using a concrete image system, a pressured turn and a restrained open ending.
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A private storm has settled by the coat hooks. Umbrellas open without hands. The tiles keep a little rain between their teeth. I step around it each morning. Then one day I leave my shoes inside. The weather does not improve. It becomes mine.
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