A contemporary poem about a floor made of distance, using a concrete image system, a pressured turn and a restrained open ending.
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The floor is made of distance today. Each step takes me further from arrival. A small figure holds the middle of the field. I ask it to move; it remains exact. So I move instead, carrying the unfinished with me.
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