A strength & spirit poem about distance, refusal, choice, where attention changes the scale of the ordinary.
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The thing does not move towards me. It does not move away. Between us, the field keeps widening, a clean refusal without a mouth. I mistake the distance for failure until it begins to feel like choice.
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