A contemporary poem about a door made of hesitation, using a concrete image system, a pressured turn and a restrained open ending.
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The door is made of hesitation. It opens only when I stop reaching. I sit on the floor and wait. A line of daylight enters by itself. The body learns the difference between forcing and allowing.
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